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Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (5)
I'm not sure how to feel about this. Oh wait, yes I do. Hark! I think I see writing below. I'm going to be a kiss arse for about two ...
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Twilight - A Reality.
See all those reviews up there? Bella is a whorish pig. Vampires feel no sympathy. Thank you Sela, for your services as a writer. I hope we can go to ...
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Annabel Lee
This was a creative idea. One that I in my wildest of dreams would have probably never have thought of. A few things I must nit-pick about though, I'm afraid. ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: He Wasn't Too Old For Her
So, I liked the setting this was in. It made the reader believe that they were in any time they so choose; medieval, modern, and even renaissance. Then again, there ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (3)
So we meet again, Miss Williams. There is no advice that I could give that you have not received. I feel the ferocity of this woman and I love it. ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Go to Hell
So, to start off, you are a very good writer. [It was not much of a compliment but that's all I can really say.] So, I will give you the ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (2)
Sela, I swear, I do think I know where this is going. But thankfully, you are not a "Twilight girl", so my fears are useless. This random guy who comes ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (1)
My sudden outbursts of spontaneous laughter turned into sadness, which makes me wonder if I should be reading this in my current condition. Well done, dear Sela. I'm glad you ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Caught (3)
Okay, so that was the last tasty little morsel for me to swallow. I want to tell you a few things about how you mixed all this in. Enough with ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Indirect Biology
Babe...what the heck? I think that would have been an interesting prologue. "Not human?" You should make her mother in the next chapter say "Ha! I was just kidding!" and ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The 12 hour love story
First off, this guy is an idiot. I'm sorry, but someone that has psychological problems would not be running around hitchhiking. They would also not trust a random person. Especially ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: ...
What the heck was that? I may not be exactly critiquing you, but holy... That was amazing! What kind of messed up things float around your brain to cause you ...
Aug 27, 2008 -
Re: Faded Fear
Creepy, Creepy, Creepy. Where you an abused child? :D Characters: Overall, I kind of liked how they were developed. I can't say I liked Carly. She was annoying. She seems ...
Aug 26, 2008
